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Edder
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0 posted 2003-06-17 07:25 AM






© Copyright 2003 Edder - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-17 07:28 AM


Nicely done Edder.... your image and the words match the lady well....


zenny
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2 posted 2003-06-17 07:38 AM


very lovely picture and words
Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-06-17 01:33 PM


oh my gosh edder she'll love this ever so beautiful and befitting!!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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4 posted 2003-06-17 01:51 PM


This was simply darling!--how appropriate!--it is for our littlewing!

Warm hugs for two warm hearts!
Linda

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5 posted 2003-06-17 01:55 PM


you are fast becoming a master at perception …she will love this
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6 posted 2003-06-17 02:23 PM


Oh, how lovely!! Fitting too. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Edder
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7 posted 2003-06-17 04:31 PM


Capt.- thank you much, good to see you here again.

zenny- glad you enjoyed

Ceinwyn- i certainly hope so and thanks for reading me.

Linda- thank you so much

Helen- I must say, as I read her work in preparation for this piece, three words came to mind: strength, determination, and beauty.

Chris- i'm so glad you think so, it was a pleasure to write.

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8 posted 2003-06-17 09:11 PM


strength, determination, and beauty...

yep, that's our sue!

Gorgeous work, Ed!

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-06-17 11:50 PM


Ed:

OMG what can I say?

What a beautiful surprise!!!!
You are such a dear sweet man . . .
thank you
I am smiling here HUGE
you know - its funny because the
very first graphic signature that
was made for me was a butterfly
and I have always equated myself
with that life - the stages.
And on a lilac - too ironic
I have two of them (had) and adore
them . . .

One day I will fly Ed . . .
thanks to you your making it
an easier flight . . .

I LOVE this
beautiful words
and amazing picture
(I stole it of course hehe)

and what you said up there?
means the world to me even moreso

All of you are much too sweet to me
Thank you for being so kind
geez . . . humbled me here
xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-17-2003 11:52 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-06-18 12:04 PM


Edder, this is really sweet,
for our sweet Little One.
Our Sue is a very strong lady
and she will fly.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Edder
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11 posted 2003-06-18 03:15 AM


K- a pleasure to see you here, as always. ~HUGS~

Sue- i fell into this series by chance, and it has turned into a labor of love. it's been a wonderful way to get to know the poets here as i gather up their work and try to get an idea of what makes them tick. the words are a reflection of you as seen by me, through your poetry.

Ethel- there is no doubt in my mind. thank you for reading.

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12 posted 2003-06-18 04:30 AM


beautiful!
Edder
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13 posted 2003-06-18 04:40 AM


thanks Dixie!
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14 posted 2003-06-19 12:37 PM


She is all that!
A perfect picture for our little tweet~

Love these things that you do Edder.

Edder
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15 posted 2003-06-19 12:51 PM


thanks Lori! i promise it's all my pleasure!
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16 posted 2003-06-19 01:26 AM


How I love this! Wonderfully done...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Edder
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17 posted 2003-06-19 02:08 AM


thanks Larry! and it's nice to meet you too!
littlewing
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18 posted 2003-06-20 12:45 PM


Edder:

thank you - what a beautiful way to say hello to everyone . . .
with your heart and I must say
what amazing insight you have

the strong part - welll . . .
dont know bout that
but a butterfly - yes I do wish
that for myself
xxoo

Edder
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19 posted 2003-06-20 01:15 AM


sue- strong, indeed. it may not be visible in the mirror, but trust me- you have it.
KoKo
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20 posted 2003-06-20 02:34 AM


!!!! That KICKED BOOTY!!!!!!! EXTREMELY WELL DONE EDDLES!!!!!!! You totally captured our littlewing in it!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (06-20-2003 02:35 AM).]

littlewing
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21 posted 2003-06-20 10:43 AM


Thanks guys . . . truly
I guess we never see ourselves . . .
like we should . . .
xxoo

garysgirl
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22 posted 2003-06-20 10:53 AM


Edder, I would like to tell you, (after reading your reply about this series being a "labor of love"), that this is truly wonderful what you are doing. I know that all the ones you are writing about are truly thankful. And, it really is a good way to get to know everyone. Thank you for these, sweet poet, Sir.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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23 posted 2008-03-01 12:22 PM


Lovely Haiku!

ARCTIC WIND

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