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zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-06-17 07:24 AM

I'm walking in the valley of life
searching for wisdom

I'm here to figure out what went wrong
finding a way, for us to revive

Past futures looked so bright in our eyes
but here I am standing
Looking for the devils' disguise
and be understanding

I look up to the highlands we owned
and face our distresses

Thoughts, fears and emotional words
all the things we always postponed

Past futures looked so bright in our eyes
but here I am standing
Looking for the devils' disguise
and be understanding

I'm gonna climb those mountains ahead
and yes I shall conquer

Hope to find the love I once met
So we can un-cry those tears we shed

The future shall look bright in our eyes
We will be loving
Tenderness will have an arise
'Us' will be living

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-17 07:40 AM

I enjoyed

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2003-06-17 07:46 AM

nicely done... now if we could only un-cry the tears that easily...

... by the way, welcome to passions... also noted that you are from Belgium... I live in Brussels since the last 4 years now...

regards
sudhir

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-06-17 07:59 AM

zenny
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-07-01 09:51 PM

zenny: I found myself in your poem, thanks. I liked these lines especially:

Resorting to draw me near

Close enough for me to hear the real song

I know about that...

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

5 posted 2003-07-02 12:41 PM

Zenny,

I enjoyed this. Welcome.

quatro

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

6 posted 2003-07-02 12:46 PM

I like. I'm not sure how it makes me feel, btu it leaves me wondering and i like that.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-02 12:58 PM

like this! good write!

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