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Drexler_McStyles
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2003-06-17 01:28 AM


I drew with my crayon
upon the eyeball of another
but it didnt help her see
that I wasnt really  her lover

words are so profound
I hear them every day
I see right through them
like a handfull of clay

I see a barrell of cinammon
right next to the butter
but the toast I make
always ends up in the gutter

if you think my head
is full of pretty thoughts
then you should try this tequilla
lots and lots and lots




Casey
or
Bust!!


[This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-17-2003 02:14 AM).]

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CaseyLeigh
Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

1 posted 2003-06-17 01:41 AM


this is a horrocity and you're a drunken fool. but a speedy payment. A+++!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-17 01:45 AM


I'll take some of that tequilla please?
timothysangel1973
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
3 posted 2003-06-17 02:10 AM


1 Tequila
2 Tequila
3 Tequila
**FLOOR**

HaHa....hey, pass the lemon and the salt!!

Cute...I liked it!

Tima C.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance.  George Bernard Shaw

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-02-06 06:24 PM


Enjoyed the Write

ARCTIC WIND

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