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Drexler_McStyles
Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2003-06-17 01:12 AM


some comrades
smuggled some animal tranquilizers
in from Mexico
we have another name
for them
we have beasts
upon which we operate
namely
ourselves
cooked to perfection
like sirloin
diced finely
like onions
maybe finer
than that
then its up the sniffles
the forest burns
but rather quickly
in turns into an elastic maze
of distorted facts and fiction
your limbs
become power tools
and your mind
turns to the clouds
for an enduring relationship
build by a falsetto carried on acid rain
this is what we get
in a smoky brown vial
for thirty dollars
I put it away
until the day comes
where I need
to put myself into
a little deeper of an emotional debt
until I need to explore
the idea of disembodied chaos




Casey
or
Bust!!

[This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-17-2003 01:13 AM).]

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CaseyLeigh
Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

1 posted 2003-06-17 01:50 AM


is this a rebuttal to the anti-drug campaign going on in another thread?
Drexler_McStyles
Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195
Venice, Ca
2 posted 2003-06-17 02:01 AM


we have never had the pleasure of meeting personally but I for one am shocked that you would think this is a PRO-drug ad!!!
This is just a way that I express my suburban knowledge of what is hip and what we must snip!!
Ive heard you have nice hips, but thta doesnot excuse your unamerican response to this; a fine work of american counterintelligence!!

shame on you and your teachers young lady!!

Mr_Angried

Casey
or
Bust!!

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

3 posted 2003-06-17 02:06 AM


get yourself a damned dictionary..

rebut- to refute by evidence or arguement. to oppose by contrary proof.

don't you tell me...

grrr...

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-02-06 06:22 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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