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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-06-16 11:46 PM


Flaming torture

Redundant progressive emotion

Taken from this ill temperment

Torn from this frequent mistaken fool

Show it off

It's all for you

Flaming Life

Burns bright inside these eyes

Draining my aura in your selfish suction

Training your heart to devour the true meanings

Hiding in the shadows of calm

Resorting to draw me near

Close enough for me to hear the real song

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-16 11:47 PM


I am speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-17 02:10 AM


wow!
Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-07-01 09:47 PM


Resorting to draw me near
Close enough for me to hear the real song
Wow, Talia!  I hear ya!

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