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Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2003-06-16 10:26 PM



1:
Waking
In the middle of the night,
I pad  down to the computer,
Just like Midnitesun
Has seen me do last summer.
I turn it on,
Hit the ‘Net
And surf to an online store.
I strike the arrow key
And start scrolling down the options.
I click where it says Enter,
Expecting to hear
The usual “graphic” “graphic”  messages.
Suddenly I find
I am no longer in my chair,
But literally standing in the store itself.
There had not
Even been time for me to dress.

I am startled, almost speechless.
This has never happened before.
I couldn’t even lock my door.

2:
It seems to be a clothing store.
A clerk comes to me,
A certain Leslie Moor
She says they only sell braziershere.
She directs me
To feel of her brazier
Because it is one of those on sale.
(no GIF images here.)
I let her take my hands,
tracing her body,
reading the stories of her soul,
But Then decide I don’t want
To have an orgasm in public.
Besides I don’t have money
And am not wearing anything.
I find the entrance  of the store.
I step outside,
Cross a little foyer,
And find I’m at my own apartment door.
So the store
Is just a few feet from my door? …
Good thing there wasn’t time
To lock it.
I go to the computer
And find the page is closed,
Because I’m no longer in the store.

3:
Then, somehow it comes to me
That the only way to reach this store
Is via the Internet,
But  that I can leave
By simply walking out its door …
Cross a few yards
To my door … …
I do a search for Leslie Moor.
It seems
That there are only four

Jaime
BTW: How do you spell brazier?
The spell checker keeps complaining and complaining …
Let’s see …
Where’s Leslie? …

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-25 04:28 PM


cute  n  interesting,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-06-25 04:38 PM


LOL, I had missed this one.
Hmmm, did ever make it back to that computer store?
Brassiere, at least that's the way I would spell it. The other spelling? I think it has something to do with a BBQ grill. LOL

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-03-24 04:31 PM


LOL is right ~ Enjoyed this cutie of a thing


ARCTIC WIND

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