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Open Poetry #27
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Laqe
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 72
Michigan, US

0 posted 2003-06-16 09:06 PM


I wrote this for a school thing and I didn't particularly feel it was  what I wanted it to be... But here it is, nonetheless. It may or may not be finished..

Music overtakes body.
Rhythm -
The foundation of the world.
The body is moved
Gracefully
Precisely
Beautifully.
Human form, twisted like words
On a stage that parallels scroll.
Dancer sweeps across blank slate
Telling a story
As a poet's pen across a page.

.Echo.

© Copyright 2003 Echo - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-06-17 03:31 AM


I liked it
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-02-06 06:37 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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