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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-06-16 05:40 PM

Oneness

Behind my closed eyes
your beauty unfolds.
Drawn to the light
you emanate
I stretch and reach out
leaping into your heart.
I travel on the vibes
released by my desire.
Let me kiss your smile
and gain admission
to the promised land
of your secret core.
Each flapping of wings
opens to a new sight
and I yearn for more
moving on and on
in rapture and delight.
We are both in motion
towards each other
craving for collision.
Oh the intimate touch
of every single particle
when we finally meet
on the supreme heights
of our Love’s dance!
Mirrors suddenly crash
fragments recompose
and reveal the image
of our sparkling one soul
shining as light upon light
singing a heavenly song
rising like the sun at dawn
from our source of One.

[This message has been edited by Margherita (06-16-2003 07:21 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-06-16 05:50 PM

Margherita
A warm and lovely write, enjoyed.

Laqe
Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 72
Michigan, US

2 posted 2003-06-16 05:54 PM

I wish that I could quote the entire poem it was so incredible! This, so far, is my favorite poem that I've read on this site. It was beautifully written and had such passion... I love it. Thank you.

.Echo.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-06-16 06:23 PM

This is so lovely Margherita.
You are gifted.
Love,
Eric

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-17 02:31 AM

Good God in Heaven
Margherita you beautiful person
this is the most beautiful
piece I have read from you
ever!

I say that all the time to you
but it's true

OMG I love this -
its just perfect
absolutley beautiful
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-17 02:32 AM

ooooooo, this is beautiful!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-06-17 08:33 AM

Thank you Seymour, Laqe, Eric, Sue and Dixie for stopping by and telling me you enjoyed.
My words were born out of a very SPECIAL moment of deep awareness of love.
Love, Margherita

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

7 posted 2003-06-17 03:23 PM

Margherita - WOW - Amazing - if there is currently a book in process - this should be in it. I absolutely Loved this
I will definately be looking for your poetry after this masterpiece - wow sounds like you found a soulmate / I hope you are so fortunate

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

8 posted 2003-06-17 03:31 PM

Margherita,
Oh my this was breathtaking! You are definately my favorite poet of uplifting poetry

Your soul must be overflowing with joy or something like that LOL

"Mirrors suddenly crash
fragments recompose
and reveal the image
of our sparkling one soul"

Oh wow!

Mike

[This message has been edited by MikeFessel (06-17-2003 03:32 PM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-06-17 03:46 PM

I do believer that "our Source of One" is smiling!

Huggums,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-06-17 04:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-06-17 05:48 PM

Margherita, this is so beautiful that I'm keeping it so I can read
it over and over without having to look for it.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

12 posted 2003-06-17 08:24 PM

I love that poem. First thing i thought of when I read the 'Let me kiss your smile' line was the smile my girlfriend has when I kiss her.

If it weren't for my horse...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2003-06-17 08:34 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile to imagine kissing a smile on my future dream girls lips! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you nso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

14 posted 2003-06-21 03:30 PM

I travel on the vibes
released by my desire.

a fabulous write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

15 posted 2003-06-21 06:29 PM

Beautiful picture!
Gorgeous description of oneness
and love, handled tenderly!
This write flowed from beginning
to end and captured my heart's feelings!

Lovely work!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2008-07-30 10:22 PM

Lovely poem Margherita!-- Beauty in words

ARCTIC WIND

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