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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-06-16 07:15 AM


The thrill of seing you,is like that on seeing one of the wonders of the world for the first time.

Golden summers sitting,talking of love,perfect partners,we drink sweet red wine.

Staring out to sea,across moonlit oceans,shimmering like diamonds,the lonely lament of the buoy in the bay,breaks the silence.

Your eyes,so dark and deep,i gaze into them and enter your velvet soul.
Drowning in love,by your love i am entranced.

Down dreaming days,i here you sigh and breathe,feel your heart beat.
Summers sickly sweet scent,sweeps swiftly on the breeze and reminds me of how i miss you.

Through ten thousand miles and more i am more assuredly close to you now than ever.
My long,lonely,lingering nights are not blue.

My heart and my thaughts go out only to you.
Respectfully i ask you to think of me,no hurt or harm, would befall you while i had breath.

My honour and glory are yours to keep,my love is timeles,of no earthly depth.

The universe is vast and without end,equivelant of my love.
When full moonlight casts long shadows onto your world,i will think only of you.

Silver moonlight will envelop our bodies,by soft sweetlty scented honeysuckle,dripping with dew.

Please hold my heart gently, i am holding yours on a pure white bed of swan feathers....

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-16 09:12 AM


I couldn't help but think of marigolds as I read...and a favorite of mine too.

Thank you for this, m'friend.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-06-16 10:19 AM


A lovely poetic expression of love.

Love & Light,
EA

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-06-16 05:30 PM


You sure know how to touch ones heart and make her cry....you are so gifted, with words, with your heart. I love your poetry,
and...

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2003-06-16 11:44 PM



Wow!!

Your words simply took my breath away and I can see that I'm not the only hopeless romantic.

"Your words are my food,
your breath my wine"

Take care......Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins


[This message has been edited by Suetang (06-16-2003 11:46 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-17 02:24 AM


stunning!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-06-17 09:19 PM


You weave words with a heady mix of images and romance..the end result is just so lovely.
Well done poet sir.

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-06-17 09:37 PM


Very very beautiful..
spoken like a true hopeless romantic.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-02-21 02:21 PM


The thrill of seing you,is like that on seeing one of the wonders of the world for the first time......"


Now thats Nice!

ARCTIC WIND

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