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To let go..or to explain
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To let go..or to explain |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I can taste its compication fluctuating between yes and no Hear me out? the whispers in mind echo in mine, when they belong in yours Self committed to self will fame love you for the person they see, or who you are? I'll watch whilst you fight for your acclaim my nature chooses the sky You perhaps will wonder where i am without looking up. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Perhaps! Before letting go .... take the chance to clarify .. Well written! Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Self committed to self will fame love you for the person they see, or who you are? good question, as usual always, reaching....gemma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"will fame love you for the person they see, or who you are?" Indeed, will anyone? You write with such thought... Enjoyed. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
i'm sorry I havent been around much or read ur poems...kind of using 1 hand atm, stupid splint but yes...your words tend to hit me... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'll watch whilst you fight for your acclaim my nature chooses the sky You perhaps will wonder where i am without looking up. Sweet Gemma, sometimes people seem to think other things are more important.....then realize what they have let fly away, after it has gone. Heart hugs to you, Little Lady  Ethel Mae (Psssttt!!! we are always around if you ever need to talk.)  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wow! great write, if ever I cannot find you.I will look up Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my nature chooses the sky and that's why we all adore you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
gawd, i love you all...you always understand, however mushed up my words are. xxxxx |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem: what can be said that has not already? I agree with it all . . . myself? smiling - all I need to do is hear you whisper with the breeze . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just a great write! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mushed up...NOPE...beautiful.. YEPPERS... lovely lovely write poetess gemma. Im still imagining your voice ... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A very Much Enjoyed write you got there!  |
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