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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
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0 posted 2003-06-16 04:30 AM


wrote this yesterday i can't think of anything else to add or take out so ill just post it so you wonderful poets are there can read it thanks
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       The unicorns run through the lakes
             Where fairies do play
           They’re sweet little pipes
     While humming the tune in their minds

             The sounds travel far
               To mountain tops
              Where dragons sleep
              And knights do rot

             Inside the mountains
                Live the tolls
             Who roam in the dark
           Searching for some warmth

             Out in the forests
               Unknown to us
                Live elves
            Who live off the land

          In the plains further north
              Stand the armies
           Who are willing to die?
          On the battlefield tonight

             Next to the kings
             Stand the wizards
          With there staff of magic
            Ready to cast pain

             Down in the south
          Stands I tower by itself
              Holding inside
          A princess from long ago

      Further along stands a eatable house
            Inside lives a witch
    Waiting for children to lick their lips
     And walk into the house of tricks

            In the heavens above
          Stands the angel of love
             Granting the wish
           Of lonely hearts below
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          In the world of dreams
              Fantasys hide
           Wishing to be found
           by little young minds
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[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-16-2003 11:03 AM).]

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-06-16 05:01 AM


what's up with the alignment of this? or have I just had one too many tonight?

good write, nice fantasy world to visit

RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
2 posted 2003-06-16 11:05 AM


passing shadows - what's up with the alignment of this?  

well if there was a button to push and it did it automatically it would be ok but no you got to do it all yourself its not easy lol anyway ive tried my best to straighten it up abit lol

thanks for the reply

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-06 05:26 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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