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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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I long for filling of a void which I can'not fill A dream destined to stay a dream Those eyes trusting loving reflecting all that is good within me When in times of need or joy the call of... Daddy I will never hear that word or see those eyes nor fill that void . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
nice write ill be looking in on more of your poem anyway i hope you reply to mine too no matter waht you think to it a reply is good lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ahhh dream - you know who loves you now you are a dad in your own right doesnt take A Father to be a Dad *smile* xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
breathing still . . . |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When in times of need or joy the call of... Daddy I will never hear that word or see those eyes nor fill that void Oh, this one really touched me. It's so sad, yet written beautifully.  Hugs  Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
hey littlewing - sue - best poet in pip hehehe I am so grateful for you as both a friend & a poet. I so needed this right now I was just reflecting on this very issue and this write - was a true bleed for all I have experienced - I will never hear the word daddy refered to me Thank - you soooo very much Mike |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Ethel - ya snuck in there while I was posting thank-you for the sweet reply passing shadows - it is heartbreaking to be told the dream of a lifetime will never come true redstone - thank-you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no, dont say never...........many do and get surprised... read ur mail already |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm too choked up to make a proper reply. You certainly conveyed your feelings VERY well. Healing hugs, EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Wow, this wrenched my heart.Never say never for sometimes in life truly amazing miracles happen.And I agree with the other one you are still a dad in your onw right. angelblueyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dreambuilder - I read of sadness in this writing. I hope things are well with you, sending you my best... BC |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I felt this, nice write. Jason |
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