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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-06-16 02:35 AM




She thought of him as her Daddy
But he surely didn't act like
                                 a   Daddy

He acted like a stranger
                          a heartless   one
One who had no care or love
                   for     his     daughter

He treated her like someone would treat
              a    woman    they    picked   up
                                   off
                                        the
                                              street

And he treated her like this from the time
              that she was only
                          a very   young     girl

Without her Mothers knowledge
                      he treated her
                                        badly
She trusted him and thought he
                                 would be her
                                               Daddy
But her Daddy         he was not
                                      she said sadly

She wished
           she could fly
                          in the sky
                                      as high as a bird
Then maybe then
                she would
                           be heard



  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-16-2003 02:56 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-06-16 02:42 AM


I know this was tough to write and I know it was tough for a mother to hear. Thanks for purging Ethel
Nan
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3 posted 2003-06-16 09:42 AM


Sometimes dad's just don't know where to begin... It sounds like this dad was one of them... Everyone loses, don't they?..
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-16 09:46 AM


Heart hugs to you and your daughter...

Linda

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5 posted 2003-06-16 10:08 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so very heartbreaking, dearest friend, my heart sends hugs out to you and your daughter and though I know these tears of truth are always going to affect your daughter I know she will soon accept Gary as her daddy and she will find much comfort and new joy with him and you together! (wipes tears) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Jason Lyle
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6 posted 2003-06-16 11:34 AM


I heard her, and I hurt for her.I read writes like this and think through my childrens eyes.This moved me.

Jason

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-06-16 11:46 AM


oh i could seriously cry.
you know i know this, heart hugs to you Ethel Mae.

p.s,  thankyou so so much for always giving me such support in your replies, youre always there when i need you. I'm not ok at the moment, but hopefully soon, it shall all be resolved. pray for me in the meantime!

much much love!
gem
xxx

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8 posted 2008-02-06 05:26 PM


:sad: Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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