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MusicMunkie
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0 posted 2003-06-16 01:36 AM



Okay! Just as a warning, this may be a little graphic to some people. Nothing sexual, but still some people would consider it gross. That's pretty much what I'm hoping for anyways. Also, before anyone goes all crazy and says "HEY THAT DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE! WHAT, ARE YOU ON HEROIN OR SOMETHING??" it really isnt supposed to. I was trying to write what was "uppermost in my heart", to cheesily quote Edgar Allen Poe. Man, I have crazy things uppermost in my heart...Oh, anyways, enjoy. ^__^
--Anna


Companion is vile
As my blood turns to urine
My urine to bile
And my brain leaks ammonia
But I’ve still got a smile

Aneurysm orgasm
Now don’t throw a fit,
But please wait a moment,
I’ve got bleach to vomit.

How long will it last?
I don’t know and don’t care
Aneurysm orgasm
What a pleasant affair



© Copyright 2003 Anna - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-16 03:32 PM


This was a disturbing poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

MusicMunkie
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since 2003-06-14
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2 posted 2003-06-16 04:54 PM


Strange, yes, but I'm glad you think so. ^_^

[This message has been edited by MusicMunkie (06-16-2003 11:34 PM).]

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-06 05:47 PM


very weird lol

ARCTIC WIND

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