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Open Poetry #27
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apoetdreams
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 52
NJ, USA
0 posted 2003-06-16 12:00 PM

When betrayal comes
soft and slow,
a mommy's wisper
the smell of
of early snow,
when it comes
this way,
a gited box
beneath pine
trees in June,
it feels like
the dying grass
under an ever-hopeful
crate of new
tomato
plants;
yellow, alone
and
darkened
until next
spring.

© Copyright 2003 Kristy Sutton - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-06-16 01:33 AM

interesting write and imagery
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-16 03:02 AM

nicely described
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-03 03:15 PM

Nicely Described Indeed

ARCTIC WIND
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