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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-15 11:17 PM

Exit

so much
pain endures
with good bye
that last
ending remark
and in
its leaving
became
the death
of my heart

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-15 11:22 PM

This is so sad. But it was beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-15 11:22 PM

Helen:

I despise
the word myself . . .
I try to say to people
see you later
Goodbye is much to final
and here you have caused me
to catch my breath a bit

Reminds me of my own goodbyes
you know?

This one hurt
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-15-2003 11:23 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2003-06-15 11:41 PM

The truth of the exit...from which we grow.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-15 11:51 PM

Get out the defibrilator..Clear!....Clear! hugs

apoetdreams
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 52
NJ, USA

5 posted 2003-06-15 11:53 PM

I really feel with you on this one today. This is my day. It is nice to read it expressed so clearly out there...no matter how sad.

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-06-16 12:25 PM

This poem is a tear, falling down the page....and beautiful, in the way that a tear is beautiful.

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______________Ratleader______________

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-16 03:35 AM

I'm here, always here somewhere

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-06-16 07:22 AM

Indeed - Oftentimes we simply avoid that moment, don't we?... Well said - as usual...

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

9 posted 2003-06-16 09:17 AM

sad.. but still an interesting read.. its still all too amazing how u can pack so much emotion and feeling with minnimal words... one day im gonna try and experiment with tatstyle of writing... keep it up 1Sicklady

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-07-23 07:50 PM

Into my library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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