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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-15 10:58 PM



sitting on my chair
looking at him
in his eyes
wanting to be with him
wanting him by myside

images in my mind
cant seem to have the
time wanting him to be
near me all day to
be with me always

feeling so sad
like i lost my
best freind missing
so very much

wanting him to
be here for good
so i can feel him

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-15 11:11 PM


This is sweet. I really enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-06-16 12:39 PM


thanks
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-16 03:52 AM


yeah, I know
RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
4 posted 2003-06-16 04:03 AM


nice poem enjoyed the read keep writing and ill try to keep up with everyones poems lol

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-04 08:58 PM


very Sweet! poem!

ARCTIC WIND

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