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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-06-15 10:52 PM



I still remember
Your fragile taste
And as I lay here
My heart's in waste
I can't look past
I can't forget
I can't look past the misery
That you have left me with

Pin me down
Erase my hopes
I now see what this is
The echo searching
The heart pretending
The care thats never there
I can't pretend this anymore
I can't pretend anything

The dark cloud inside of me
Taking over everything
Blinding everything I see
Why's everything a blur now?
Everything I reach to touch
That shies away its side
Who is there to hold
When nothing's left inside

Make the scars
That stick out in my skin
Are you happy now?
Leaving me beside myself
With my open mind
Watch me fall apart
Watch me take apart
Watch me steal back
What I used to call a heart

Take away my heart
Rip away my spine
I'm nothing now
Nothing without
That part of you

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-15 11:12 PM


I know how this felt when my ex greg dumped me. I really enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-06-15 11:13 PM


LastMoments - Sometimes we must let go of that part...

BC

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-16 03:51 AM



Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-02-03 03:23 PM


Very Sad Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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