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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-06-15 05:54 PM


In the country
of beautiful music,
where the heart feels
the notes come alive
in the winds of the trees
swaying within your voice
singing into the heavens
of just feeling so good,
that you come alive
within your inner self,
climbing so high
as to feel your whispers
enter inside your audience
within caressing words.

Yes this is the country
of beautiful music,
that sees your eyes sparkle
in the magic of guitar strings
singing in a harmony
with angel choruses
flying on clouds so soft
that the words make love
to the world before them.
Where the spell created
is in Nature’s harmony
soothing the mind
for all of eternity.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/01/03 to 06/15 /03


© Copyright 2003 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Laqe
Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72
Michigan, US
1 posted 2003-06-15 06:44 PM


I love your style of writing... Beautiful imagery.

Nixa,
Laq

[This message has been edited by Laqe (06-15-2003 06:45 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-06-15 11:15 PM


Country music rocks. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-06-15 11:17 PM


D.Lester Young - I love that guitar of mine, and the melodies it plays...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-16 04:08 AM


hmmm...dated a country music station DJ once....haven't listened to country music for years now
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-04 09:00 PM


I like a Little bit of Country in my music!

It's very soothing and nice to listen too, or

even to calm yourself down!

Enjoyed your write

ARCTIC WIND

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