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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-15 01:12 PM


The stars
blined by their beauty
i walk down a sandy beach
all the while my eyes staring
always staring
always wishing
wishing for the stars to shine for me
wishing to be a part of them
my feet make imprints in the sand
but still i stare
i stare at their purity
i stare at the magic that fills peoples hearts with joy
my heart is beating
always pounding
my mind is blank
i feel no joy
i feel no magic
so i stare on
waiting
always waiting
for my star to shine...

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-15 01:25 PM


yeah, I Know how this is
ctowen
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2 posted 2003-06-15 02:05 PM


Some may say the enlightment of one's star is in how they reach for it.


    Pick one near to you, wish really hard, and ...

     ...like magic, you will know who you are.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-06-15 06:25 PM


breathe in the starlight...
your special glow will be within
the exhale

Laqe
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since 2003-06-15
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4 posted 2003-06-15 06:40 PM


Beautifully written, I like your style. It was easily read, yet not too simple... Nice job.

Nixa,
Laq

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-02 11:50 PM


Beautifully Written

ARCTIC WIND

byski
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since 2006-01-26
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Alberta, Canada
6 posted 2008-08-15 01:56 AM


We each have our own star that shines for us alone. But where is it? How will we know it if we do find it? The worst feeling is to be alone and without a purpose and that is only magnified with seeing other people finding their stars.
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