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gyiel marlok
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0 posted 2003-06-15 10:44 AM


FASTING WITHOUT STARVATION,WHAT'S SO CONJURABLE
UNKEMPT TO NO HUMBLE..SOME PUZZLE..
YOUR DEADPAN NONSENSE...CREMATING JUMBLE
SYMBOLIC OPPRESION
NOT ASKING FOR OASIS...THINK WE'VE LEARNED OUR LESSON..
TORMENTED SOULS
ANARCHY HOLDS..PROPHECY STANDS ENLIGHTEND
WHO CALLS BLUFF..WHO BENDS..WHO FOLDS..
ZEN HAS A WHOLE...
SLIDING DOWN A RAZORBLADE
LAND IN SALTY ALCOHOL...
IT'S OUR FALL
CATASTROPHIC WITH SOME TASTE..
LEAKING THROUGH LIFE WITHOUT SLEEK GRACE..
I NEED TO LIVE...TREADING THE WATER
MOTIONLESS..WHO'S TO GIVE...
FIGHT
UGLINES PROVOKES TRUTH..
WHAT DO WE HAVE TO LOSE.
LISTEN TO THE CHIMES OF THE DEAD MORNING BELL
DEAD STARES. I LEFT FOR GOOD
NOTHING SO RARE.NO SEARCH FOR US...
BURST THROUGH NOTIONS WITH A GRIEVING THRUST
WHAT ARE YOU ASKING FOR...
A CLEAN BED..
A QUILTED PILLOW OF TRUST
MAYBE THAT'S TOO MUCH..SOMETIMES A
RUSTY FLOOR..
A CARDBOARD BOX..
WITH A ONE HINGED DOOR...
YOUR REVOLUTION,DON'T NEED IT
YOUR AURA NO LONGER CAN SEE IT
I WALKED THIS FAR,STAYED PASS THIS HOUR
NO NEED FOR HANDOUTS..NO NEED
FOR SALVATION DROUGHTS...
UNDERSTAND..
THIS HEARTFELT TRIAL...
I'M BEGGING FOR NOTHING...
FIGHT,FOR WHAT,FOR WHO,FOR THIS
FOR NOTHING,FOR DRIPS
  DON'T GIVE UP,JUST WAIT, I'LL WAIT OUT IN THE RAIN
  STAND IN THE FIRE AND IGNORE THE PAIN..
DRINK THE PAIN...PISS IT OUT,AND MOVE ON THROUGH
FIGHTING FOR ME...FIGHTING FOR YOU...

HOUSE RULES!WHAT?
FREEDOM OF SPEECH
FREEDOM OF EXPRESSION
IF YOU CAN'T TAKE A FEW CURSE WORDS
THEN SHUT YOUR EYES
BECAUSE THE WORLD IS ONE BIG CURSE WORD HONEY
SO DEAL WITH IT. OR DON'T READ
TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT
SELFISH WRITERS,GO HOME,THE UNKNOWN WILL ALWAYS EDIT

© Copyright 2003 GYIEL MARLOK - All Rights Reserved
gyiel marlok
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1 posted 2003-06-15 10:55 AM


TO THOSE WHO READ THANKS,AND HAS FOR ALL THE OTHER WRITERS HERE,I'VE BEEN HERE FOR A SHORT WHILE,AND I'VE SEEN THE LIGHT..MUSIC IS FREEDOM,ROSES ARE RED STUFF IS KILLING ME
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-15 11:35 AM


I really enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader
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3 posted 2003-06-15 11:35 AM


Goodbye.

Some of life's little problems do seem to be self-correcting, don't they?



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-06-15 11:58 AM


ROTFL at your reply, Ratleader.
Local Parasite
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5 posted 2003-06-15 11:59 AM


One less caps-happy pseudo-poet for us to worry about.  Good riddance.
gyiel marlok
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6 posted 2003-06-15 01:39 PM


THE BEST YOU'LL EVER SEE
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-02 04:24 PM


Enjoyed your last post

ARCTIC WIND

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