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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-06-15 08:07 AM

An Old cliché

My ego likes to fly each day
On the uplift of what they say
With open wings I wait the breeze
And flutter with each little tease.

The power of their flowers lush
Lifts me up and make me blush
The twirling of their frills and trills
Overflow with vivid thrills.

Each remark of sweet replies
Takes me by complete surprise
They dance upon my spirits quest
And give to me your phantoms best.

Exquisite is its touch of sweet
A lullaby of adult treat
And though it is a fantasy
It graces me with ecstasy

And I in turn can only say
The old cliché, you make my day.

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-06-15 08:38 AM

... Adults love a lullaby as well as the next, sweet Sy - This is wonderful...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-15 09:06 AM

"Exquisite is its touch of sweet
A lullaby of adult treat
And though it is a fantasy
It graces me with ecstasy

And I in turn can only say
The old cliché, you make my day."

And you dear Sy..make our day!
This is truly lovely!
Special blend of Father's Day tea awaits you this morn love.
~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-15 09:13 AM

Oh Seymour this is so lovely and beautifully said .... some would not admit it, but isn't it so ... a few kind words and comments can make us open our wings.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2003-06-15 09:14 AM

some cliches are worth repeating daily

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-06-15 09:22 AM

Nan
Love you too.

Nancy,
Tea and hugs, what could be better.

Margherita
Isn't that the truth.

Midnitesun
You are so right.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-06-15 09:54 AM

Ahh, this is as gentle as the breeze outside my window this Sunday morn. Very light and offers one a smile or two. Thankyou for this dear Seymour. Toast and marmalade with your tea to-day? hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-06-15 10:08 AM

Always a pleasure dear Chris.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

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Washington

8 posted 2003-06-15 12:43 PM

Delightfully refreshing!
Cliches tend to stand the test of time
and remain forever.

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-06-15 12:49 PM

JilGirl,
Thank you for the read and comment.

passing shadows
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displaced

10 posted 2003-06-15 01:27 PM

wonderful! yes!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-06-15 01:44 PM

passing,
Thank you for the wondrful,

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2003-06-15 08:50 PM

Yes indeed Sy,
The girls are swooning. You're the man!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-06-15 09:08 PM

Exquisite is its touch of sweet
A lullaby of adult treat
And though it is a fantasy
It graces me with ecstasy

And I in turn can only say
The old cliché, you make my day.

Yes, dear seymour, you mke our day with your words.

Thank you, dear poet Sir.
Hugs :hugs

Ethel

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2003-06-15 09:30 PM

and Sy, you make our day! as a cliche
might say, Bet your bottom dollar on it...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

15 posted 2003-06-16 09:51 AM

Cliche away, you make our day
for 'tis upon sunrise I wait
to see stray thoughts in rhyme at play
to hear creaking at garden's gate
where your friends come to rhyme with you
and play all day within the blue

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2003-06-16 09:57 AM

Each remark of sweet replies
Takes me by complete surprise
They dance upon my spirits quest
And give to me your phantoms best.

Each gift you offer for our day
Brings us delight, so we must say
Our praise - please know it is sincere
You're our delight, sweet Seymour dear.

*S* Cliches are born from repeated truths... and this one is always fresh on the eyes. *S*

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

17 posted 2003-06-16 09:58 AM

Good morning, Dear Sweet Sy!

Is it not fitting that you should receive replies that make your day?--for you surely do ours with your daily sonnets!

Loving hugs,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-06-16 12:36 PM

Larry,
You do pretty good yourself, LOL

Ethel
thank you sweet.

Barry,
thank you my friend.

Sunshine,
It is my pleasure.

suthern,
You are a love. Kiss:

Linda,
You are an Angel, LOL

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

19 posted 2008-02-06 05:29 PM

Very Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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