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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-14 10:37 PM




blowing winds
scatter sands

i hang on
relentlessly
to the dream
of your kiss again,

even the unyielding dunes
stir up love's ashes
thought to be long silenced,

on the random kindness
of the wind

i am gifted again
by your echo

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-14-2003 11:49 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-14 10:44 PM


very nice write,,,,,,,,,

QjQ

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2003-06-15 12:29 PM


thank goodness to the reverberations of romance


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-15 12:33 PM


cool...cool...
bklynboy
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florida
4 posted 2003-06-15 05:53 PM


Brings back memories of passion on the dunes. Do you ever write stuff that doesnt stir feelings, even those thought to be long forgotten?
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-06-15 05:57 PM


I hold onto dreams such as this...once you enjoy a nice kiss you always want another...
and I dream of desired first kisses...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-06-15 06:07 PM


on the random kindness
of the wind

i am gifted again
by your echo

Oooooooooo girlielocks...
how sweet this is!!!


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2003-06-15 06:09 PM


thanks for reading
bboy, glad to evoke this feeling from you;
something about the beach, i think u said, you know it well too.......

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2003-06-15 07:26 PM


inkedgoddess - tender and lovely...

BC

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-06-15 07:29 PM


Very nice...gentle and loving.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ratleader
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10 posted 2003-06-16 12:34 PM


Oh, I like this.... and may you always hear that echo -- until the exact moment when you don't need to hear it any more....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
11 posted 2003-06-16 12:36 PM


Beautiful writing lately Mish but then it always was..missed it so
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
12 posted 2003-06-16 01:52 AM


Michele:

the wind replying . . .
very nice
and the shifting of the sands
hmmmm . . .
as always -
xxoo

christian
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13 posted 2003-06-16 01:57 AM



echo. beautiful, echo.



Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
14 posted 2008-02-03 02:32 PM


Very Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

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