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Dance
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-06-14 10:09 PM

I guess I stole the sun
to buy you the moon.
I'll give you all my love
if you can stop the doom;
If you can stop the sun from shining
and the sky from turning blue.
Then I will give all my love to you.
When my world is spinning out of control,
Then I'll notice exactly what you stole.
You took my heart,
you criminal.
But I love you for it,
Because you are an original.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-14 10:14 PM

Dance....I missed you, I believe, when you first came to Passions. This is good, and I enjoyed my first view of you. Please...accept a belated Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-06-14 10:37 PM

I can relate, in a similar way.
This write shows courage and strength
within the writer.
Blessings to you!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2003-06-14 11:28 PM

Hmmm reading that made me feel it, it also helps that i'm listening to Billie doesnt it, either way this was an amazing poem. thank you

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-06-14 11:50 PM

This was beautiful. I loved the expression.

Cold hands means a warm heart

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-06-14 11:51 PM

Ain't we all felt that way from time to time.....

Lord knows I have!

A very good write!

Tima

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-15 12:30 PM

beautiful! Welcome to Passions! I think I missed you too.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2003-06-15 12:34 PM

beautiful poem,i loved it. very graceful flow!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-06-15 12:39 PM

very nice write ,,,, i enjoyed well...

QjQ

visitvenus
Member

since 2002-12-30

Posts 101
PA, USA

9 posted 2003-06-15 01:41 AM

Very touching...beautiful write! I look forward to reading more of yours. Welcome to Passions!

-Venus

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

10 posted 2003-06-15 07:15 AM

i liked it alot nice write

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

11 posted 2003-06-15 07:42 AM

A wonderful write. You came to Passions about a week before I did. I am looking forward to seeing more of you.

Patricia

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-06-15 09:35 AM

How sweet the forgiveness to the criminal who stole your heart!
Very lovely!
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-06-15 12:32 PM

hello, welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed the 'dance' and read it with a smile of understanding

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2003-06-15 01:08 PM

Very very nicely penned..
A belated welcome to Passions!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2008-02-02 04:19 PM

Enjoyed your write

ARCTIC WIND

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