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Kahlil
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0 posted 2003-06-14 08:03 PM



hope I can just zonk out tonight
suggestions of intimacy not outwardly rejected
just snidely put off in unpleasant manner
not even a tease
don’t know how it happened
not going to dwell  
i think i stand taller than that and i know
how to sleep in my own bed
an exercise in control needs to fail immediately
in order to not be repeated  
or maybe i’m stupid

surrounded by people flailing their agendas
had to throw up my heavy duty shield
in order to fend them off
i am the listener big heart capacity
caring and sharing and all of that  
spent from my work week
wanting only to be
held and loved any way possible
leave myself as long as possible
but it's not going to happen, appears impossible
and that's just how it goes sometimes

off to my silky cocoon................


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-14 08:06 PM


that's how it goes sometimes, yeah
Saunni
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2 posted 2003-06-14 09:19 PM


I can understand well. Great write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

BlueEyedGirl
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since 2003-06-13
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3 posted 2003-06-14 09:37 PM


I feel the same way many times...touching...great write; full of pasion...
Anna

mirror man
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4 posted 2003-06-14 10:23 PM


I can relate to this too.  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-15 06:36 AM


Anybody that's good at anything goes through a learning experience.
They don't all work out but some will...as the song says, I found my thrill on Blueberry Hill...James

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-02-02 02:31 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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