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Open Poetry #27

More than I asked for

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-14 07:01 PM

She tempts me
knowing my weakness
is a fine woman
and a good drink

and she tells me
no strings attached
And she means it
Would you say no
to Isis?

She threatens me
with a good time
did you think that
roughing me up would scare me off?

She will get
what she asked for
and it may be more
than she asked for

It may be more,
than I asked for

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-14-2003 09:30 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-14 07:06 PM

wow what a write,,,,

QjQ

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-06-14 07:07 PM

sigh*i know how you feel. good write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-14 08:15 PM

wow!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-06-14 08:21 PM

A great write.

Always be careful of that for which you ask.

*smile*

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-14 08:43 PM

Damnnnnn Jason . . . .

now thats what I'm talkin about . . .

nice strong write
kinda scary - like this side of you
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-14 10:01 PM

Would you say no
to Isis?

dont turn it down, it doesnt come along every day does it?

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

7 posted 2003-06-16 04:26 PM

Hauntingly beautiful, chilling the soul to the marrow of the bones. Well done Darkling, as usual.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-06-16 05:32 PM

depends what she looks like..oh i'm gonna get hell for that

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-02-06 05:47 PM

Enjoyed your write indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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