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My Castles Wane
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My Castles Wane |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Castles Wane The waves wash down my castles drain They slide and melt each drag of wane And thought I build them stout each time What time will do is near to crime For times the master of begin It is the change and we the skin And though we make a mark when born We turn around and it is gone What emblem can we leave in state? To make a mark, eternals eight Or must we leave and disappear Into the endless of our fear I cannot see the sense of start To know of life and then depart Shivers me timbers, shakes me bones And even eats my marker stones If I could find a notch to stay I’d give myself forever’s way. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Shivers me timbers, shakes me bones And even eats my marker stones terrific lines,, enjoyed the write... QjQ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Thank you for the enjoy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sending you anything you so require to keep your castle from waning and to stem the ravages of time! Sending you some of my magical potions made from the waters of the Eternal Fountain of Youth!  Loving hugs, EA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
There you are Seymour, I was worried about you. Couldn't find you anywhere this morning. Hope all is well with you. Wouldn't be nearly as nice of a day without your words of wisdom. Thankyou for this. Since my sister Enchantress is gone for most of the day....I have the tea as well as the muffins ready....anytime you are!! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For times the master of begin It is the change and we the skin ================================= What emblem can we leave in state? To make a mark, eternals eight ================================== Shivers me timbers, shakes me bones And even eats my marker stones =================================== YOU ARE SO COOOOOOOL!!!!!! Could those couplets be any cooler..anymore clever... just look at the wit & wisdom...the rhyme...the word play...the symbolism You are me King of way cool Sybabers... and as for this part.... If I could find a notch to stay I’d give myself forever’s way. you already have found your notch.. with your poetry and your art you are engraved in time...and also with your charm you are engraved in our hearts...so the way I see it..thats a whole lotta notches  *winkiewinkie* Me loves ya Stinky    |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it's great to see you in the afternoon as you usually grace the mornings but either way, it's your golden heart! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, surely there will always be some emblem marked on the stone of this cathedral, God Bless You, the spirits never leave here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are truly an earth angel. Chris, Always ready for tea and hugs. JM, You are the icing on my cake You are the winnings that I take You are the butterfly I see You are my cup of raspberry tea. WWRS Noah, From your words to Gods eyes. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
What emblem can we leave in state? To make a mark, eternals eight Or must we leave and disappear Into the endless of our fear All we can do is seek courage and hope we leave this place better then we found it, accepting the gifts bestowed...This was beautifully written...thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It is a pleasure to read your comments. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love to read the wisdom in you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...can't say it any better than JM...why is that?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Always love your replies. Martie, She is pretty good, LOL |
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