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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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there it are will times come when to every pass thing that comes I to will pass arrive and and at at that that point that that at at and and pass arrive to will comes you thing that no pass when to times come are will there it |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is very exciting and beautiful! how creative of you!!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You know I love this and can't wait for that day..happy happy joy joy m'friendss |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
kool write!!! creative...  QjQ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have me hugging myself...  precious viking?  I love yopu. (nobody saw that)  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i love yopu too especially when its fresh ..mmmmm yopu..grins |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I saw it... lol @ Raph cool write Brian |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
SWEET,MMK,K |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri? what a sweet man you are . . . (I saw that too K) xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
relationshipspihsnoitaler How special they can become |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brian?...this is SO COOL! What a lovely gift for a lovely lady. So glad I stumbled across this tonight. Hugging you both,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-15-2003 04:00 AM).] |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
A joy for the eyes and a teaser for the mind. I like it I like it! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I fine companion to your "S" poem... They HAD to be a pain in the arse to construct. Ya done good |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this one deserves extra credit...  I'll let KA decide what the extra will be LOL  Very Cool poet sir...you make the moth smile with your heart inspires. "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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