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Open Poetry #27
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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-14 03:57 AM


I ask her “will you go out with me”
Time stops still as I wait and see
My heart is thumping deep within
As the butterflies inside are set free

Then comes the flowing warmth
Covering me with happiness inside
As she answers “yes” into my mind

An everlasting smile is burnt on my face
As we join in the kiss that binds are souls
And joins are hearts from the love we hold
© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-14 04:39 AM

ah...young love...i remember it
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:06 AM

nice write,,,
timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-06-28 01:07 AM

Dixie...you ain't that old chic! HaHa

but, yes this does spark a memory....

when the butterflies swam in our bellies!!

Great write RedStone
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4 posted 2003-06-28 01:22 AM

I should try this "asking out" thing sometime, I love butterflies.

Enjoyed this.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-28 02:31 AM

this certainly takes me back to my younger days

Maree



Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-06-28 02:48 AM

oooo!   This makes me feel really good!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-06-28 05:13 AM

Always nice to get a yes...James
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-06-28 10:33 AM

So lovely Lee.
You captured the moment so nicely.
Love, Margherita
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