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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-14 02:01 AM


i wrote this for littlewing because shes helped me understand my poetry more and shes been nice to me so she said she likes angels and i thought shed like me to write her an angel poem well hope she likes it.

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Walking along the cold night air
An angel sings her sweet lullaby
Sending me to a place deep inside
Opening the world that I long to stay

As I float through the forest within
An angel followed by me along
Protecting me from my nightmares

I watched the angel spread his wings
Wishing and longing to be like him
Suddenly out from my back came my wish
Spreading my wings smiling deeply within

Floating to the heavens above
Touching clouds that angels could
There in the distance I saw her shine bright
Littlewing the cutest angel tonight

She moved her eyes towards mine
As she smiled and flew to my side
Filling me with happiness
I longed I could find inside

She whispered so gently into my mind
“Sweetest lee write this dream tonight”
Slowly she faded into the light
As morning awoke me from my dream

© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-14 02:05 AM


She whispered so gently into my mind
“Sweetest lee write this dream tonight”
Slowly she faded into the light
As morning awoke me from my dream


This is so sweet, Lee. I know that our Sue
will love it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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2 posted 2003-06-14 02:12 AM


Lee:

you have no idea how much I really
needed this right now and how sweet
of you to post it for me here . . .

It means so much to me -
and the part about your wings . . .

Smiling HUGE that you see me in
this light and am grateful that
you are here . . .

All I did was help to bring out
something beautiful that resides in
you to begin with . . .

you Lee -
are an angel for writing this
truly
and I thank you, my friend

Keep writing
(this is beautiful . . .)

God - I am so surprised . . .
you made me smile
xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-14-2003 02:14 AM).]

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
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caddyshack
3 posted 2003-06-14 02:49 AM


Red:

is nice to see fresh talent
what a beautiful write
from one angel to another
Welcome to PIP
I look forward to more from you  

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-14 04:37 AM


just a beautiful write, wonderful tribute to our angel Sue
RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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5 posted 2003-06-14 04:49 AM


Glad you all liked the poem i wrote for sue

maybe if we become freinds ill write you one too lol

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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6 posted 2008-02-01 05:51 PM


Beautiful post!

ARCTIC WIND

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