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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-14 12:51 PM



why must i be
always the one to see
the past and future around
not listening to my own two cents
i guess im just dence like that

seeing his soft blue eyes again,
oh the smile,it goes on for miles and miles
i think back when we embraced for the first
time i get chills that go up and down my spine



why must good things come to and end..      
if that is the case why

should any of us even bother trying,
to get a love or be happy
one day it will all come
crashing down around us
not making a sound but indenting our physical
souls so deeply we begin to go crazy...

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2003 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
NickTofteland
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 74
MN, USA
1 posted 2003-06-14 01:05 AM


mmm, lots of emotion here. I can really relate to these words though. The simple thought of days past quickly overshadow any glimmers of doubt one might hold. I enjoyed the read.

Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God."

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-06-14 01:15 AM


thanks for the compliment yea life really just sucks sometimes...i am done trying to make sence out of anything anymore... LoL
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2003-06-14 04:52 AM


yeah, I understand this
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2008-02-01 09:04 PM


Everything must come to a end, which sucks

ARCTIC WIND

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