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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-13 11:20 PM

Onetime
I after time
Gave you a kiss of prime
Your lips made my heart beat in chime
My sweetheart was loving you such a crime
Were my hugs terrible or prime
With you we could both climb
To love in time
Onetime

QjQ

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-13 11:21 PM

This is so sad. But I enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2003-06-13 11:29 PM

These are fun, aren't they? Shoot, after my first mishap with a rictameter I thought I would never try again. Wrong! Next morning I was working on a new one called, Learning. How appropriate, huh? Always had a habit of trying before reading the instructions.

Very good, Q. I'll be looking for more rictameters from you.
Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2003-06-14 05:00 AM

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

4 posted 2003-06-14 05:04 PM

I've never noticed rictameters before.
They're most interesting. I'll be looking for them from now on.

You've told a complete story here and it's
amazing that you even made each line rhyme!

Thanks for this great write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-06-14 06:06 PM

(sigh) Oh Glenn, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you tell your thoughts so well in this debut rictameter of yours, yay! (big hugggsssssss) Though I am not a big fan of form in my own writing, I do love form however and do admire those who can always pull off such great gems like these, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!