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Birds and Blondes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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into wet sands i sink myself painting poetic thoughts on the open sky, my words offered to the sea, birds splash at the shore, drink and eat from the source, take to the sky without any complexities, soon the waves erase thoughts and prints of both birds and blondes, the welcoming ocean does not discriminate [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-13-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very soothing this poem was. Enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovely write mishy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
calming...a ehjoyable read |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
do they know, (the birds) do they care.......... that i must take my blondness from the bottle? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I love the finish of your poem the most. It may not always be true, however. I know the ocean does not usually discriminate, but I've heard that Toerag got thrown out of the ocean because he was leaving a ring around Asia. That might be a rumor, though. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This sounds almost depressing, the image of birds and sea and how you use it. I like this, but I probably wouldn't even recognize the depression if I hadn't known a girl who was blondness also. I colored her hair for her; but it was a box. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele - yes - your right the water - the waves - the birds - they dont have much to say to you but ssshhhhh . . . . . I love the water - just moved by it - always need to be by the water when I feel bad This is beautiful as they all are xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can picture it!  Have a great day! EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no not depressing......... not this one!!!!!!! birds and blondes as one and the same to the loving ocean.....no more , no less blonde in a box, yes mirror, thank god for that box |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michele...I love this. Beautiful in words and imagery. Wonderfully done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Inked...is all feisty. Me like to lay it on...ahem I mean I don't know much about blondes. It was pretty smooth though. Jai |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, I really like this. Especially this part.... soon the waves erase thoughts and prints of both birds and blondes, the welcoming ocean does not discriminate Isn't the beach and the water just the greatest thing? So calming. I love the waves. I found an old poem about the beach I'm going to post sometimes. I guess you've noticed that I wreite a lot about the beach.  Hugs  Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ethel, i cant think of anyplace more inspirational than the beach; i can always find or lose something looking out into forever thanks, viraynes, btw, for finding this again\in the lost shuffle and thank you too jai for the read [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-23-2003 12:13 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle - reminds me of many days on the beach. Were those your footprints I saw??? BC |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Calming....maybe I will take a paint brush to the beach. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Hmmmmmm I saw another picture here . . . A menacing ocean . . . stealing it all. (takes all kinds, don't it!) s.a.g. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Good one to read. Thanks for sharing. Bon-Bon |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
the serenade of the sea is so tranquil at times,, enjoyed the write.. [This message has been edited by JilGirl (07-23-2003 07:15 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicey thought and written,,,  |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Goddess - waves may erase footprints but they dont erase the memories of a sunset stroll in paradise I really enjoyed this & as always I will be watching for more Mike . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very lovely piece of writing!--and I darn near fell off my chair when I read Long John's reply! Huggums, EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
take to the sky without any complexities, That is the nicest thought Michele!! And of course you had me the title! You be such a pretty bird girlielocks~ |
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