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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-06-13 09:59 PM

Last night I walked
in dark of woods
when midnight’s breeze
reached to the trees
and opened up leaves’ canopy
allowing me a star to see
star bright, star’s light
piercing heaven’s firmament
resplendent, nay transcendent
shone glory of the god’s extol.
It was as if trees with night’s breeze
had framed the night
revealed night’s soul
within the light
of star so bright.
Last night I walked
in dark of woods
last night I saw
a star
shine
bright.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-13 10:03 PM

This is just full of wonder and awe.

Thank you Tim, for reminding me of that "quiet joy".

Another treasure from your pen.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-13 10:16 PM

Tim! Free Verse.
But rhyme in time
with each loved
line
and I, sublime
read all
in chime....

Thank you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-14 05:13 AM

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2003-06-27 03:47 AM

Enjoyed the read PoetFriendTim...
*~coco~*

rapturedmist
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 30
USA

5 posted 2003-06-27 05:01 AM

that was lovely...I haven't looked at stars in a long while and I almost almost forgot what it was like, but this poem reminded me again. :smiles: Have a wonderful day.
-RM

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-06-27 06:38 AM

oh the stars of twilight, the twinkling glow of a million candles in the sky...perhaps God's reminder of the light which guides our hearts...lovely write.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-06-27 02:53 PM

when midnight’s breeze
reached to the trees
and opened up leaves’ canopy
allowing me a star to see
star bright, star’s light
piercing heaven’s firmament

How very lovely. *S* I like this so much. *S*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-06-27 03:37 PM

Nice writing...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-06-27 06:19 PM

That was a wonderful walk ... thank you!
Love, Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-06-27 07:32 PM

enjoyed

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