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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-06-13 09:34 PM


yea, I am the quickening
trembleskinned and suckling
I am scratches ye call sin
ssssssssssssssssss
I shed another skin--
sacred
in the violin
crying joy to live again--
I shall be the death of me--
but not today--
no not today.

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2003-06-13 09:37 PM


NO, ye shall fly
my butterfly
ye shall fly

icebox
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2 posted 2003-06-13 11:02 PM


"I shall be the death of me--
but not today--
no not today."

Very nicely done!

Thank you for sharing it.

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-06-13 11:02 PM


Ah leave it to H to come up with the perfect reply. Did you read it K? Read it again, and again until you realize what others see that you won't allow yourself to. With that I'll shut up and run away from the impending hypocrite remarks hurled my way..phblllllt! grins
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-06-13 11:39 PM


Helen?

and?

Ice...you are too warm to suit your name. But it's okay, I had to add a blaze to suit MINE. *smile* Thank YOU.

And Raph?
"phblllllt!" ????

grin. Gotta a hair stuck on yer tongue?

three of my special peops. Gotta love it. Why, you'd think it was my BIRTHDAY or somethin'!

wranx
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5 posted 2003-06-14 12:42 PM


No.......Not today....
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-06-14 12:44 PM


ED?

I am SO sorry--oh yeti?


passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-06-14 04:54 AM



littlewing
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8 posted 2003-06-14 09:45 PM


K - late on this . . .

but mannnn - ssssssssssssssssssss

awesome write and what a way to bring in your day . . .

I heard that skin shedding . . .

xxoo

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-06-14 10:07 PM


no not today, not today,
i even allow myself to actually eat CAKE on my birthday ....... have a happy again

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-06-14 10:09 PM


Did I hear Raph echo something that I have heard before?  I think...so....I think...so.

Let me put my finger into the wind and see which way it blows...oh yes...it blows....
truth.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-06-14 10:27 PM


no not today...

Wonderful write Ser..hope your birthday was a fantastic one.

~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Local Rebel
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12 posted 2003-06-14 11:46 PM


better to go (down) in a blaze of glory eh?

I thought I was the one true evil in the universe -- is this competition?

serenity blaze
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13 posted 2003-06-14 11:51 PM


Laughing at Reb--um, I don't think there's any competition-- "I am no one..."

watch out for flying peas, baby!




and thanks all, my simple celebration ended up in a not so simple hangover...

Hugs to all, and stabbing at Reb with my pitchfork... grin

ecrivan
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14 posted 2003-06-15 12:42 PM


you have that gift of molting...and the words continue to shine along with the rejuvenated skin...


gemjop
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15 posted 2003-06-16 01:55 PM


karen, let me write like youuuuuuuu!

bloody amazing.


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16 posted 2003-06-16 02:06 PM


Karen, I just wish I could see inside your head for a little while. You are really amazing, Lady....so much stuff going on in there.......and you can tell it all so well.

You do fly, girlie....

Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-16-2003 02:06 PM).]

Artic Wind
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17 posted 2008-02-06 05:37 PM


Nice Write S!

I really Enjoyed it a lot



ARCTIC WIND

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