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Thomas J. Allie
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since 2003-06-13
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NY USA

0 posted 2003-06-13 08:48 PM



Love.
What is it you ask?
Is it a word?
No
It is a feeling.
A feeling in two peoples hearts.
That is what love is.
nothing more nothing less.

© Copyright 2003 Thomas J. Allie - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-06-13 08:55 PM


Ah Thomas.  What is Love?  Welcome to Passions.  You'll find much more to it than what you post, but perhaps, just perhaps, you have placed it in its proper perspective.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
2 posted 2003-06-13 09:02 PM


TJ

    Great first Post here! Wonderful work and as usual I am proud of you.

Love
Dad

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3 posted 2003-06-13 09:05 PM




(does happy dance) YAY!!! (smiles) Oh Thomas, I'm so happy you joined, dearest friend, I am blessed to have read all your fathers wonderful poetry so far and now I get to read yours too, yay! This is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, you are very wise and know the true meaning of love that many take for granted, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Thomas, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-06-13 09:54 PM


love is a rose but u better not pick it; it only grows when its on the vine...............
nice kid

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-06-13 09:56 PM


Beautiful entrance post!
WELCOME TO PASSIONS~
I look forward to more of your work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
6 posted 2003-06-13 11:03 PM


that was beautifull, sometimes all you need is a few words to get your point across. awesome poem.
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
7 posted 2003-06-14 12:04 PM


Short,sweet,to the point. very well done! sometimes the shortest poems have the greatest meanings..

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
8 posted 2003-06-14 12:06 PM


This is so true and to point. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2003-06-14 04:57 AM


yes!
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
10 posted 2003-06-14 05:17 AM


Ah ha! you must be the chap who wrote the poem 'BLACK'? i'm so glad you've joined us, i was hoping you would.

wonderful first post Thomas, welcome to passions, hope you enjoy it here as much as your dad does.

much love,
gemma
xx

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-02-01 09:14 PM


I say love is a connection between two souls.

ARCTIC WIND

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