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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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0 posted 2003-06-13 08:25 PM


                      

                      pick
                   a         I
               point          and
             to                 side
          say                      out-
        how                          from      
       much                            spiral
       I                                    the
      enjoy                                  at
       traveling                            looking
           this
              with
                 you
                  somewhere
                       in
                      .between.
                           in
                            here
                              wasn't
                                   I
                                  yesterday
                                      and
                                        today
    living                                 is
       in                                  it
         the                            before.
           spiral                      here
             is                       been
               travelling          haven't
                 hallways         we
                     with     windows.
                       occasional

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-13 08:32 PM


You are amazing.

I did indeed pick a point. SEVERAL in fact. (Just give a Gemini options and watch her have fun.)

There are so many beginnings and possibilities in this, oh you...



(happy b'day to me...) muah.

you ARE mad viking genius.


Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-06-13 08:34 PM


this is AWESOME!!!!  It was very fun to figure out and the message travels right along with the design!!!
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2003-06-13 08:36 PM


this is great...happy day K

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-13-2003 08:37 PM).]

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-06-13 08:52 PM



This is more than special.  You are brilliant to take such a symbolism of words and wrap it into a Gemini.  I do hope Maree sees this as well, as she shares this very special day with our very special Karen...

Y'know, these last few days, our poetry has been about our poets...and those in the field of art who have now passed beyond.  I like the rhythm and rhyme of Passions, when we look beyond our own egos, and stroke others in such a way as to say, "this is for you..."

Bri, I take a moment on Your Poem...to say, thank you, to all of the poets who grace our pages, and look beyond the id, and ego of self, and write for others.  That is compassion, and that is Passion, compressed....

Thank you Bri...for all you do...and for the unique ways in which you create your art.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-06-14 12:20 PM


DAYYYYYUUUM!
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
6 posted 2003-06-14 12:36 PM


that was magnificent... I love how it was displayed on the page... very intriguing!


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-06-14 02:28 AM


Bri?

you keep amazing me . . .

God this is beautiful . . .
Birth - yes - and how grateful
I am for this special birth indeed

Happy Birthday Lady K!

Bri - this is just . . .

silk

xxoo

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
8 posted 2003-06-14 04:23 AM


Bri,
             ~speechless~
                  
              

  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2003-06-14 04:34 AM


*in awe with mouth hanging open*
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-06-14 01:05 PM


Amazing Bri genius really
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-07-01 03:02 AM


WOW, I don't know how I missed this. For a moment there I thought I was wearing 3D glasses. This is ab so lute ly bril liant.

glad I came across it.

keeping it.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
12 posted 2003-07-01 04:45 AM


You know, there are some people who have the love and talent to write great poetry, and then there are those who just seem to jump all boundaries and create exquisite masterpieces that capture all of the senses!! If I were asked to describe this and you, the word 'genius' comes to mind!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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