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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Time sends change, poetless, pointed jagged edges of a diamond not quite cut to perfection. Mind boggling sensitivity creating locks of hung fortitude. Each day left into the dust of memory, repetive and dark, in a gloomy sense of aftermath. A moment lost in a time of nowhere and no place. Today a change made lest you cry swollen tears. Cannot force yourself to succeed on perfection, nor can you levitate in sadness. Deep in the heart comes a change from love and happiness where the sadness and pain rears its ugly face. Time sends change, poetless, pointed jagged edges of a diamond not quite cut to perfection. This poem goes with this post... /pip/Forum29/HTML/001428.html [This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (06-13-2003 06:30 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, Nice. And pain and sadness send change as well. Trust me I know. Peace and courage to you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
kellie i don't understand why people are not replying to this, this is the **** ,that means good. people must be afraid of those really dark intense writings |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I chased this demon for many years...it mocks you because it is unachievable. A great write...and believe me I can relate. Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very intense! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Kellie, I think you ARE perfect. It's the junk of life that makes us think that perfection is something for which to strive. You have written it so well... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thank You all, and I think I have achieved perfection of imperfection! lol.. such a oxymoron but so entirely true! Love, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
My thoughts and prayers are with you, Kellie.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, we are all praying for you Kellie. Be strong.....be strong. hugs, Chris |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
In my thoughts, strength to you. Jason |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Get yourself well young lady... You name, tonight, is on the lips of many Sung in psalms from around the world Each intended for an audience of One Perhaps soon, you'll return to read how very much you are cared for here. ~wranx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hang in there Kellie...you can do this sweetie. Let love be your comfort. You are in my heart and in my prayers.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A strong young lady with a long life ahead of her... Kellie, come back to us real soon! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kellie, you are a piece of perfection and we want you to come back to us. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kellie - I know you are fighting a hard battle right now - our thoughts and prayers are all for you - come back soon to us Bella Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my heart is here |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thinking of you, kellie, we need you here... |
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