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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-13 04:17 PM

I feel the tension of a storm brewing,
my neck wishing it were braced
to relieve the pain,
my thoughts pounding out the rhythm
of words wishing to be heard.

Soon, my body says, soon
the rains will come again,
to wash away the happiness
that the sunshine brings,
keeping me on the inside
always looking out, wondering
what it is like to be free.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-13 04:20 PM

I know how this is. great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-06-13 04:20 PM

my friend... the portending sorrow in this is disturbing... I hope the rains hold off..and you can find the sun for a while...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-06-13 04:26 PM

Thank you Julie.

Ron, my body is telling me along with the thunder that a storm is almost here.

I have an excedrin headache that even excedrin won't rid of...been that way since I awoke this morning, a good excuse for my sorrowful writing.

I can't believe that out of probably 35 days it has rained all but 3 and the most recent are thunderstorms....and I can hear the thunder in the distance. Once it rains, my headache will disappear.

M

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-06-13 05:48 PM

Maureen, boy, do I hear ya in this one. It's been raining so much lately in Ontario Canada..and my arthritic fingers and joints are really kickin' up a fuss. Hope your headache goes away. I wish sunny skies for you real soon. hugs, Chris