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mirror man
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0 posted 2003-06-13 02:51 PM


        He knows for sure
        he spoke to her
        again
        and again
        and again
        she spoke to him.

        There was a we
        and certainly
        a two and three
        sectioned booster
        maybe gooster
        tripple truster.

        Yeah,
        it wuster.


[This message has been edited by mirror man (06-13-2003 09:47 PM).]

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-06-13 03:55 PM


i wish i could say something but i will
bump you up, so someone else may

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-06-13 04:17 PM


(chuckling) I'll say something... like the play on sounds here...and the way it lets you fill in the words you want to some degree as to what it was or wasn't..

I enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-06-13 06:30 PM


okay, that works for me !!!!!
mirror man
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4 posted 2003-06-13 10:03 PM


Cpat Hair -- thank you.  Filling in the blanks, as you say.  Haha!

inkedgoddess -- thanks for the boost.  I'm glad you liked it.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (06-13-2003 10:09 PM).]

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-14 05:23 AM


pretty neat
Midnitesun
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6 posted 2003-06-14 10:57 AM


ROTFL. Do you need some Windex?  LOL
mirror man
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7 posted 2003-06-14 12:01 PM


passing shadows -- thank you very much.

Midnitesun -- all my windows are rotten dirty on the outside, haha!  

Kahlil
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8 posted 2003-06-14 04:16 PM


...where did the luster...
go

Foxyoasis
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9 posted 2003-06-14 04:20 PM


very intersting

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-06-14 08:00 PM


You sure about that?
Hugs Mirrorman~  

mirror man
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11 posted 2003-06-14 10:10 PM


Kahlil -- that must be one of the filled in blanks, haha!

Foxyoasis -- thank you very much.

BluesSerenade -- I'm sure my windows are dirty on the outside.  Other than that, no.  

Martie
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12 posted 2003-06-15 12:30 PM


mirror man...as always, interesting!
timothysangel1973
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13 posted 2003-06-15 12:34 PM


Had to read that one thrice....

I giggled, my husband shot me a look of confusion...I closed the door!

CUTE!  Probably not the descriptive you were looking for but us southern gals keep it simple..Ha Ha

Tima C.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance.  George Bernard Shaw

mirror man
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14 posted 2003-06-16 10:32 PM


Martie -- thank you very much.  You input is always appreciated.

timothysangel1973 -- no, I hadn't thought of cute.  But cute's okay!  Thank you.

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15 posted 2008-02-06 05:53 PM


Enjoyed the Post

ARCTIC WIND

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