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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-06-13 02:33 PM


~*~
Surprise
Eyes made contact
Our ears heard sweet hello's
You gazed at me and I at you
We exchanged words that both had longed to hear
At this moment in time both knew
You were for me always
And I for you
Surprise
~
Darling
Open your heart
Allow love to enter
Receive my advance of passion
Let us enjoy a lifetime of romance
Together today and always
Without you I'm nothing
With you I'm all
Darling
~
Honey
The time is now
Send the invitations
And order your white gown and veil
You the bride and me the groom so happy
Together we will share each day
Enjoying each as one
Till death part us
Honey
~*~


~thanks Karilea for your
help on my first try at
rictameters~




QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-13-2003 02:48 PM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-13 02:40 PM


    BRAVO!!!!    

This is wonderful, Glenn, and you  know that I love them.
Hugs  
Ethel

P. S.  You did them in perfect form.
by the way!!  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-13-2003 02:42 PM).]

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-13 02:50 PM


thank you ethel for your nice comments  

QjQ

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-06-13 03:30 PM


oh happy day!!!!!!!!
so sweet

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4 posted 2003-06-13 03:44 PM


very nicely done... I enjoyed this for its form and it tender..

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5 posted 2003-06-14 05:33 AM


good stuff!
gemjop
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6 posted 2003-06-14 05:40 AM


Oh Glenn, i really enjoyed the way you put these three together. can we have more please?
JilGirl
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7 posted 2003-06-14 10:44 PM


My gracious, Q! I've been practicing this ricto stuff and hardly think that I can compete with THIS one!
Three in a row, developing into the love story of the year!
WOW!
You're the "Ricto" (Or, is it "Ricta" ? Someone please correct me!!!) guy of the year!
Blue Ribbon!
THANKS for sharing this!


Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (06-14-2003 10:46 PM).]

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-06-14 10:49 PM


jilgirl you forgot to leave your address where do i send check?  lol  thanks for your comments

QjQ

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9 posted 2003-06-15 12:17 PM


Oh this would be great for a wedding! loved how you displayed it!
the_loner_23
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10 posted 2003-06-15 12:21 PM


I love them all

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
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11 posted 2003-06-15 12:32 PM


good show...on your try, keep the ink flowing


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12 posted 2008-02-02 02:07 PM


Very Lovely! its like receding your vows lol



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