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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-13 09:27 AM


The raging tides crash against my soul
Grazing the heart I hold within
As the fierce storms break out inside
It slowly drowns me with fear

Darkness surrounds me from all around
Covering me with loneliness
Spreading inside and out I cry to the gods
Open me up inside and heal my wounds!

As I look into the darkness
Light appears overhead
I see an angel before my eyes
Her wings of love holding her tight
As she calls for me to step into the light

I move forth and she holds out her hand
And a blinding white light covers my path
I open my eyes to find that shes gone
Was it my dream that brought her along?


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-13 12:52 PM


Lee~
You are such a welcomed heart to this circle~
Thank you for being a poet and for sharing with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-13 12:55 PM


This is so beautiful. This reminds me of something Liam would write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2003-06-13 01:21 PM


thank you all that took the time to read my work and to enjoy every word of it thanks again

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-13 01:57 PM


indeed, a beautiful write
RMW
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5 posted 2003-06-13 02:35 PM


Angels. Yes. And not simply in our dreams. Thank you for taking a moment to share yours. Bob
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6 posted 2003-06-13 02:37 PM



As I look into the darkness
Light appears overhead
I see an angel before my eyes
Her wings of love holding her tight
As she calls for me to step into the light


Lee, this is so beautiful. Thanks for
sharing your dreams with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-06-13 02:51 PM


Oh how beautiful!
and...so very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-06-13 04:12 PM


I believe in angels...James
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-14 10:09 PM


This was a lovely piece of writing.

May your dream be reflected in reality!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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10 posted 2003-06-14 11:25 PM


This was a beautiful poem, fantasy or reality? Is your love real or fake? beautiful, descriptive poetry!
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11 posted 2008-02-02 01:47 PM


Its good to let loose some feelings!

ARCTIC WIND

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