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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-06-13 08:37 AM

The Circle of obtuse

Obtuse surrounds by picket fence
Hence the prepense of pretense
To go beyond a mind must wield
An abstract of another field

The paths are endless you may tread
The real or the fancy of your head
However the path it is a goal
A door that opens to your soul

It is there the verdant grows
Your field of green the path you chose
The mast that holds your sails domain
Your field of food your sweet of sane

It is an Island in the sun
A residence of only one
It holds the reason and the deed
It is the life’s blood of the need

So eat your bowls humility
And walk your path of destiny

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-06-13 08:58 AM

I see you've had your bowl of wisdom rice this morn *L*

One of the things I have always loved most about your poetry is the lessons in both humanity and humility.

Added to your gift of rhyme and imagery,
of vocabulary and word play...and all the many wonders of your impressive pen, and what we end up with is a poetic prophet who flies on a handsome dragon

*ww*

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-13 09:00 AM

Sy...

where DO you pack
all of your wisdom?

Every day, we are pleasured with treasures...

every day.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-06-13 09:03 AM

The paths are endless you may tread
The real or the fancy of your head
However the path it is a goal
A door that opens to your soul

'Morning Seymour

You are so right. We do bare our sould here, don't we?

Hugs

Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-06-13 09:04 AM

JM,
That's funny I always thought my dragon was handsome too. Winkiewinkie Randy stinky

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-06-13 09:08 AM

Sunshine
My sweet, we only have so many days. LOL

Ethel
Yes we do.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-06-13 09:09 AM

So much wisdom comes from your pen..
each and every day Sy.
JM is right..you are a poetic prophet!
Wonderful morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-06-13 09:21 AM

Nancy,
At last some tea.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2003-06-13 09:27 AM

"To go beyond a mind must wield
An abstract of another field"

My thoughts, exactly. I missed you too

Glad you're still you.

Sincerely,
Reg

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-06-13 10:06 AM

Good morning, Mr. T.!

It seems to me that your path is lined with stars of insight, wisdom, talent, goodness ...--and your soul is the brightest star of all!

Spoonfuls of lovin' magic,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-06-13 10:15 AM

rwood
Thank you my dear.

Earth Angel
Are you also an angel to santa claus? LOL

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2003-06-13 10:17 AM

My goodness Seymour! I will have to read this awesome write a couple of more times. Does your mind ever rest? You are simply amazing. Thankyou for these thoughts to ponder this morning. A slice of cherry cheesecake? Yummy. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2003-06-13 10:38 AM

However the path it is a goal
A door that opens to your soul

So very true... *S*

If your wisdom rice is available in stores, please let me know where I might purchase some... if it isn't, I'll keep nibbling from your plate. *S*

I very much enjoyed, Seymour. *S*

Martie

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Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2003-06-13 11:28 AM

Sy

You are wise and wonderful!

passing shadows
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displaced

14 posted 2003-06-13 02:08 PM

another classic Seymour

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-06-13 02:31 PM

Chris,
My mind will have plenty of time to rest. LOL
Cherry cheese Yummy.

Martie
And you are pretty and gracious.

passing,
Thank you my sweet.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2003-06-14 06:36 PM

It is an Island in the sun
A residence of only one
It holds the reason and the deed
It is the life’s blood of the need

As always, a wonderful message from you.
Food for the soul, indeed.
Nice Sy~

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

17 posted 2003-06-14 07:10 PM

i enjoyed that,very good.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-06-14 11:57 PM

BluesSerenade
Thank you for the read and like.

Foxyoasis
Thank you for the enjoyed.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

19 posted 2003-07-18 01:12 AM

Sy...I always enjoy your words of wisdom.
Love this, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

20 posted 2003-07-18 07:35 AM

Vicky,
You are a dear, thank you.

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