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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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Too tired of a way to say hello just simple pleasure can throw the compliments and clutter of the minds need the desire to want the wanting to please faithless followers to market the scholars and all that it has been to all that could have been I say to you that mishaps and misfortune pronounce and post objections to this moments affection due to obiding rituals of simple morals and attitudes I give to you all that I can be and my hands are weak I will seek you to set me free I proclaim my stance feet covered with dirt walking miles around thoughts of you my mangled melignant disease is beliveing that nothing is what it seems insanity and obsession thinking myself to death wishing this pelting rain wasn't as wet I continue I betray only self loving him he's settled down to rest comforatble in bleached white sheets up against that fake image the family,he represents the time is no longer spent and the rest floats to the floor say goodbye to what was before his black empty core he's not feeling complete anymore |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, just really sad |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
very sad but beautifuly deep and personal, i like how quick the words seem to come,the flow just passes and before you know it, it is at an end..! Brilliant writing. Thank you. Goldenrose. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Exactly my thoughts, I love the way this flows, it's just incredible AND sad. I think this is your best ever, Talia....the theme and the flow, yeah.. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 ARCTIC WIND |
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