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Bedtime Lullaby
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Bedtime Lullaby |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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live wire bullet heat thermostat repeat each dog day shallow sun await the day when I become null and void no current keep this live wire from eternal sleep |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
awesssssoooooooooooooooooooome! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
What Raph said. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, what Raph and Jason said!!!! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  QjQ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! that's cool! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
says be honest so here goes well actually it must be one of them advanced poems cos i didnt really understand it maybe when ive learnt abit more ill be able to read it and tell you what i really think but for not its just a confusion to me my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So much said and so much can be said in such few words, you're real good at that Sue. hugs Maree |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Raph - I knew you would like this one . . . could hear that all the way over here - thanks! Had a little inspiration with this one lol xxoo Jason - another awesome - very cool TY Ethel - three times a charm TY Thanks Q! Dixie - very cool TY Maree - wow coming from you that means a lot thank you Red - lol - I just write what I feel, I follow the form of poetry called "SuePoetry". It is basically about - hey - have you ever seen Pacino's "Dog Day Afternoon?" Well go watch that and then you will understand this . . . Is just about being sick and tired of the same old routine and TY for being honest Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-13-2003 03:03 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you kick ass, gal, always good to read you. packed full of so much sue, that i understand. much love, gem xx |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - awesome.... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your wing may be little, but your talent sure as hades isn't!  Loving hugs, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
classic sue poetry ..........hit and run, and powerful....... [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-13-2003 10:21 AM).] |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
The first half or so was confusing. The words were musical, but I couldn't figure out what they had to do with each other. However, it became clear as I read the conclusion. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
As ever a deeply thaughtful write from you, sue, thanks for it. Phil. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- Everytime I see your name, I know I'm not going to be suprised by the quality... and EVERY TIME I am suprised by the quality. This is just too good to put into words. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Littlewing: lmao - a live wire like you will never sleep eternal besides I believe you are what powers electricladyland |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem - you know I learned that from you missy . . . thank you Thank you Bill Linda - hehe love the way you slip that in there - TY ahahah Michele - classic suepoetry - yes - thank you Ero - I know sorry I have a way of mingling things together that make no discernable sense thank you Phil - you are most welcome - thank you Brad - much too sweet to me - thank you Dream - ahh dream i only wish I had half the electricity of that land - thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
damn! sheesh 4 real maybe i should b feeding my muse more than just chocolate n guinness eh!?  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Young lady you dont know the power you have Infinite - comes to mind I love your style & am convinced it would be a darker world without you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: ahahaha nope - you see being Irish 'n all and I am a certified choco myself TY get better please dream: you do live in dreamland (kidding) so very sweet to me you are thank you (you need glasses) thanks guys xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always write with so much charismna and heart and I think we all live nights like this where we can't find any air to breathe and we feel the heat under our collars! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
Very Very Cool. That's all I can say. COOLNESS!!!! I asked God how much he loved me... |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
AM/PM coals glow heats to steam pressure builds wheels spin again and again valve pops pressure drops whistle sighs night nighs s.a.g. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thanks Dixie . . . Noah - thank you so much and yes you are so right indeed Ashlynn - awesome reply thank you! Dear Sir - you know me well . . . what a fitting response thank you *smiling* Thanks guys xxoo |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Well, I could have included a quote I liked especially, but then I would have to quote the hole piece. Loved it, so simple, yet not. ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Broken - your stuff is amazing xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love it! ARCTIC WIND |
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