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majnu
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0 posted 2003-06-13 01:07 AM



Purpose

I saw a dust fall the other day,
'Twas a flow of fine grains falling,
Gravity
Attraction
Inevitability.
Our's are losing battles in a mock war,
Entropy ever increasing our supplication,
Disorder from order from chaotic core.
Menin! Angaar!
Damn the good night!
Fight!

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-13 02:34 AM


awesome! yes!
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:04 AM


very good,,,,
timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-06-28 01:05 AM


Ya'll make me feel so inadequate here!

That was good stuff Majnu!

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (06-28-2003 01:06 AM).]

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