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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-06-12 11:02 PM


Where are
your eyes
turned today
as an angel cries?
Spare me
the fairy tale
that you see all
we both know
you see only
what you choose to see
It's been awhile since
we turned our backs
on eachother old friend
but don't you dare
deny one who still
believes
an angel in need..

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-12-2003 11:08 PM).]

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-06-12 11:04 PM


ohhhhh!!!! *nods* dont know what to say...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-12-2003 11:05 PM).]

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-06-12 11:15 PM


I say "A-MEN Brother!"  Amen, from the shadows.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-06-12 11:22 PM


with nods and prayers for our Sweet Sue.

sigh.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-06-12 11:26 PM


What?!! What about our littlewing?!! Is she alright? I do hope so. This is a touching poem Aenimal. Chris
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-13 12:18 PM


prayers on the way for Sue.


Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
6 posted 2003-06-13 12:21 PM


Hoping all is well in the life of a good friend.

Jason

majnu
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7 posted 2003-06-13 01:10 AM


i understand. here's an old one, i wrote in my rage:

he Burning of Eden

Let the fire run rampant through Eden;
Consuming the garden, it progresses to the gates of Heaven...
What shall He do?

Sitting upon clouds watching Eden burn;
What shall He do?
As the women beg for relief from ravaging Demons;
What shall He do?
As live children are cut in two;
What shall He do?
While the smoke turns the sky black;
What shall He do?
When stench of burning flesh makes the air un-breathable;
What shall He do?
His Prophets ask why he has forsaken them;
What shall he do?
He shall play the fiddle as Eden burns.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
8 posted 2003-06-13 01:23 AM


Raph?

You are the sweetest most dearest person
to me . . .
Do you have any idea how this made me smile and cry?
Of course you do . . .

Be proud of you for this
it made my night to see that I am
not alone in my confusion

And yes - I hugged billy . . .
Thank you sweety
truly
I cannot even begin to tell you
or write here what you mean to me
xxoo


Im ok guys - just a bad day
Raph made it all better
All of you - so so good to me here . . .
thank you I'm smiling now . . .

Maj?
post that please . . .
its amazing

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-13-2003 01:24 AM).]

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-06-13 01:33 AM


Sue.....we're here for you, Little One.....
Always........
Heart hugs to you, Sweetie     


And, Raph??  A couple for you, too, for posting
this for Sue......   
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-13-2003 01:34 AM).]

majnu
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10 posted 2003-06-13 02:07 AM


i am glad you are feeling better LW.
we are all confused, some of us are just too confused to realize their confusion.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-06-13 02:15 AM


another AMEN from the shadows...

a very touching write Raph

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-06-13 11:34 AM


oh i could cry. i might. i'm sure she'll be smiling now. and sue, i hope youre ok?

beautiful tribute for a beautiful and most deserving friend.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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13 posted 2003-06-13 01:27 PM


Spare me
the fairy tale
that you see all

see all the misery down here, the pain, the
endless angst and injustice people suffer for no apparent reason..........

yes, the buddha is right, life is suffering
sorry to go off about the myth of the bigman........
but yet, i belive in angels, go figure.........
sue, will be soothed, by such words, i am sure........sweet and lovely, raf

Ratleader
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14 posted 2003-06-13 01:36 PM


You are a good man, Raph.... good and Good, man and Man.

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
15 posted 2003-06-13 03:55 PM


Thanks all especially for supporting our wonderful winged one
littlewing
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16 posted 2003-06-13 08:46 PM


. . . Im a gonna cry now . . .
you guys are all so sweet . . .
and yes Raph is a good man indeed and all of you so very sweet for caring . . .

thank you
and thank you Raph
xxoo

Thomas J. Allie
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since 2003-06-13
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17 posted 2003-06-13 08:56 PM


Loved this poem.As a new member god job :smile
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
18 posted 2003-06-13 11:10 PM


Hugs Sue don't cry look at my face and laugh

Thomas thanks and welcome to PIP!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
19 posted 2003-06-14 01:09 AM


Aenimal - I pray there is nothing wrong with littlewing....

BC

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-06-14 02:04 AM


I have looked at your face . . .
the tears are from your words silly

Bill - so sweet you are . . .
just a bad day and a sweet sentiment
from a true friend . . .

thank you

Hey Welcome to PIP Thomas

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
21 posted 2003-06-14 02:55 AM


Raph -

beautiful write, my friend
nice to see your heart bleed
in a good way

Littlewing -

has someone gone
and clipped your wings again?

How can the wings of an angel
be so fragile?


littlewing
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New York
22 posted 2003-06-14 12:31 PM


aww dream - your so good to us both

thank you

Hey!  where are your writes MR?
xxoo

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
23 posted 2008-02-01 10:10 PM


hopping everyone one is alright is all

ARCTIC WIND

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