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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-06-12 10:59 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

I could try to sing a love song
But such a talent I don't possess
So I'll rely upon my words
For my true love I now confess

Before you came into my life
Love remained far from view
Now through nature I am reminded
How much in love I am with you

I see your beauty in the sea
And feel your warmth in the breeze
Your love sweeps me off my feet
As it brings me to my knees

You are the centre of my universe
The east to my west
You believe in who I am
And know me better than the rest

You taught my spirit how to fly
As you brought out the best in me
Your love makes me feel invincible
The brightest future I now see

* * *

"Send love in all directions -
North, South, East and West.
Experience for several dazzling moments
how it is to be at the
very centre of the universe"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-12 11:10 PM


very nice write and pic,,  just terrific...

QjQ

Canon_D_111
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2 posted 2003-06-12 11:45 PM


I remember that place...how much bliss is there... you are lucky to have found it
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-13 03:42 AM


Sue, you never cease to amaze....so beautiful
NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-06-13 09:33 AM


Sue, feels like forever since I've read one of your stunning love poems. I love this and love 'that place.'

Hugs my friend ...

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-13 09:50 AM


Sue, this was a real treat for the heart--and eyes!

Luvin' hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-06-13 01:11 PM


Sue:  Lovely!  Enjoyed it very much.

Betty Lou Hebert

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-06-13 01:19 PM


How lovely in every way...how I am glad I found you there amidst your Sunday morning. Wonderful verse, Sue.

Patricia    

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-06-13 03:57 PM


Very, very nice...James
Goodknight
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9 posted 2003-06-13 07:51 PM


you write powerfully of love Sue - Paul
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10 posted 2003-06-13 09:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and you truly can sing a love song too, for I believe using the voice you have is the most beautiful voice of all, and these would make the perfect lyrics! (kiss on cheek) This is stunning, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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11 posted 2008-02-01 02:17 PM


Very Beautiful

ARCTIC WIND

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