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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-06-12 08:17 PM



Words caressed my mind
As I listened and cried
Thoughts crashed into my heart
As I thought and I cried
I searched for the feelings
That emptied into my soul
As I cried I thought and listened
Eyes closed - my mind adrift
Hoping for a spirit lift
Words and thoughts and feelings trashed
Watched my sprit seeking light
Saw my soul
Heard my mind
Stumbled on a thought
Sighing crying thinking thoughts


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1 posted 2003-06-12 08:19 PM


Hi Paul,  haven't seen you much.  Gosh,  I
relate too well to this.  

Goodknight
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2 posted 2003-06-12 08:27 PM


Barry - thanks for the read - have been off pondering - plan to post now and then again - thanks for noticing I had been away - Paul
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3 posted 2003-06-12 08:29 PM


Ah good to read you tonight Paul!
You left much for us to ponder with this write.
~Well done m'friend...Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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4 posted 2003-06-12 08:33 PM


Paul

Sometimes digging deep causes anguish as well as joy...certainly the journey sometimes trembles.  I could feel your seeking in this poem.  Hugs to you, my friend!

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5 posted 2003-06-13 04:40 AM


you're not alone there
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6 posted 2003-06-13 01:01 PM


HiPaul~
I've also noticed you've been off~
Nice to see you back~

'Stumbled on a thought'

Oh my ... I've done that a time or two or three or four or more myself !

Greatly enjoyed the read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Suetang
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7 posted 2003-06-13 07:10 PM


Hello Paul

I was so pleased to see your name again here at PIP.  Your words touched my heart and were words I could relate to. I hope all is well with you.

"A friend bears the song
in my heart
and sings it to me
when my memory fails"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2008-02-01 02:00 PM


WOW some powerful stuff written here!


ARCTIC WIND

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