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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


0 posted 06-12-2003 07:48 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

In a house with,
no doors or,
windows.
Four corners, but
no locks, or gaurds..
No way in, yet
no way out.
Unless, persuasion is the key,
though,
no locks are there,
to open it.

In a house,
I lie restless.
No thrills to be sought after.
No love, hate,
pain nor sadness or,
anger.

I yearn to crawl under your skin,
begging for a way,
out and then again, in.
Place my tongue upon your heart, to see,
what is it you've been feeling
lately.
Lightly caress your veins,
feel the pulse of your pain..

We were both caught up..
in our own illusions..
we were both caught up..
in our seclusion..
And perhaps with a little,
persuasion..
I could open you up from the inside,
and see
everything you've hidden..

This is not
going to stop me,
no walls are
going to keep me from...

getting locked inside..
getting held captive by...
getting warmed by..
locked in an embrace with..

You are my illusion,
my seclusion..
Sweet, bitter,
persuasion..

This house does not exsist.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach


1 posted 06-12-2003 07:52 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Very interesting write. I like this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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interesting indeed
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3 posted 06-25-2003 09:03 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

giving this a bump so it can be read more.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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Hey great poem keep writing



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"We were both caught up..
in our own illusions..
we were both caught up..
in our seclusion..
And perhaps with a little,
persuasion..
I could open you up from the inside,
and see
everything you've hidden.."


Loved that Kaoru...keep it up!!
Tima
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 03-28-2009 01:56 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind


In a house,
I lie restless............."

I would go nutty!


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